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Nice first sentence.

Scathing Online Schoolmarm approves.

In the wake of the Ray Rice horror show, and the Adrian Peterson horror show, and the Greg Hardy horror show, and the Ray McDonald horror show, and the Daryl Washington horror show, and the Jonathan Dwyer horror show, and the 725 other arrests among the players who make money for him, NFL commissioner Roger Goodell announced on Friday afternoon in a mea culpa press conference that all 32 teams and their employees must attend educational sessions on domestic violence and sexual assault.

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LESS NICE SENTENCE:

The University of Nebraska treated one patient who recovered and is now caring for a freelance NBC cameraman.

Margaret Soltan, October 17, 2014 3:53PM
Posted in: Scathing Online Schoolmarm

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2 Responses to “Nice first sentence.”

  1. AYY Says:

    The Schoolmarm might approve, but the multiple references to “horror show” in the first sentence take it out of the realm of neutral reporting. Didn’t the Schoolmarm notice, or has she learned by now to have low expectations for the Guardian?

  2. Margaret Soltan Says:

    AYY: It’s an opinion piece – not neutral reporting. I think the Guardian’s pretty good.

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